Trifextra Challenge: Dark Hour

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The phone rang at 4 a.m.

Her head rang with static silence.

The voice on the line was tinny, breakable, struggling to recite instruction over the ebb, flow, and crash of the ER.


For the Week Six Trifexra Challenge.

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7 thoughts on “Trifextra Challenge: Dark Hour

  1. “breakable” makes me think it's a newbie working the ER phone, trying to give the news…which makes this even worse (in a good way). Nice job.
    Trying to decipher Captcha 'words' is even harder when on the couch watching Phineus & Ferb between 2 kids, getting kicked every 30 seconds.

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  2. Thanks so much for linking up to Trifextra. Remember, this
    weekend’s entries are being judged by the Trifecta community, so make sure you
    visit the site at the close of the challenge to vote. Our linking service will
    not allow you to vote for a link from the same computer where it was submitted,
    so plan ahead!  Voting closes 12
    hours after the close of the challenge. 
    Winners will be announced with the Monday post.  Hope to see you back then.

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  3. “”breakable” makes me think it's a newbie working the ER phone, trying to give the news…”

    I didn't even consider that as I was writing. 🙂 I like the implication.

    Thanks for stopping by.

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